Flogging the Quill critique!

So the first page of my first book, Bleeder was featured today on Ray Rhamey’s blog, “Flogging the Quill,” where he generously offers a first-page critique to eager novelists just dying for feedback. (Yes, I’m talking about myself).

He gave me feedback! Yay! What do you think? Did he get it right? Would you turn the page?

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