Sample MS Edit

My first book was called BLEEDER. These are the first three pages of my second draft.


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Sentence Edit for full MS or 1st 50 pages:  $1.50/page. (approx. $.006/word)
This little beauty is what makes my Critique Partners love/hate me. After formatting your manuscript for submission, I’ll comb through it line by line. From awkward sentences to fixing punctuation, every part of your manuscript will be put under the microscope. This package includes:
*Professionally formatting your document to ready it for submission.
*Real-time reactions- both constructive and encouraging- as comments in the sidebar of the Word document.
*Highlighting of awkward sentences, word overuse, and story or plot confusion.
*Punctuation, spelling, grammar, and typo fixes (with Track Changes in the Word document).

To order a Sentence Edit, email me at lauralee.edits[at] and tell me about yourself and your project! Payment is handled through Paypal invoice.

To see more query/ms edit options, go here!


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